Hello again!

I thought I'd give a bit of an update. To be honest, nothing has been going on but writing, writing, and more writing. Writing and putting everything into Twine (which I've had some beef with recently). 

I've realized that I am much more organized than before. My writing, syntax, and naming convention are so much better than when I started and I can really tell when I look back to the start of my project. There have even been times when I've considered doing a complete overhaul of the project but I QUICKLY abandoned that thought as that would be unnecessary time and work at this point.

Anyways, here's an example with how things were and how things are now:

Here's a screenshot of what the chase scene looks like. Each cluster of passages are a "path".

And here's the "Quest" I'm currently putting into Twine (only two of four paths have been added so far). As you can see there's a liiiittle bit more to it than the chase scene (which at the time was a huge undertaking for me). Oh, how times have changed. 

As I've planned it, the story is linear but each path and many of the choices offer bits and pieces that others may not. You might learn something about a character in a route that isn't theirs. Maybe you'll get some tidbits about the school with one character and not another. Some characters will tell you things if you ask them things, but others won't. I'm trying to have fun with it and not take it too seriously (it works 70% of the time).

Anyway, this is just a small update for me to let you know what's going on. Even if things are going slow and I'm not making as much progress as I'd like, we're getting somewhere :)

Thanks for checking in!

- Hannah